So lets do some examples

In my last post I talked about Ad Copy.  Well after I posted it, and earlier today I was think what better way to follow up then to do some Ad Copy examples? Now, you don't really need to know much about your products, as Michael Dlouhy mentioned on a call I was listening to the other day, all the product training you need can be said in a single sentence.  "Try it, you may like it, if not there is a 30 day money back guarantee!"

 All right I got these two products.  One is a cookie that helps you to lose wheight.  The other is a new form of enery drink, comes in a powder form rather then your traditional canned drink.  And I think we will throw in one for the Mentoring For Free service as well.  Just so that you can see it works for what ever it may be that you are trying to promote.

So what do we know about the first product.  It is a cookie that helps people to lose wheight!  

All right lets review how we do this BOG-OP.  Benefit - helps lose whieght by eating cookies, Occupation I use them I am a Chef.  Geography I live in Manitoba.  I lost 7 pounds in 6 days, that would be your odd numbers.  Finally, personality I am very easy going. 

So lets see then, this would make me think.  An easy going Chef from Manitoba lost 7 pounds in 6 days eating his favorite snack Oatmeal Raisin Cookies.  Fairly simple yes.  All right lets try the Energy drink now.  And lets make someone up, because not everybody is as worry free as I am about spreading the personal information for all the world to see.  

So the benefit is great energy with-out the crash! Who would need this, maybe a hockey player from Calgary, every one knows the Flames need a bit of a pick me up.  The energy may last from 3-5 hours.  Hmm, Worn out hockey player from Calgary gets a 5 hour energy boost, from Crave.  With out the crash usually associated from energy drinks.  Does that work?  What do you think could make these work better?  It is not as easy as you would think is it.  But it is still very simple. 

Professional network marketer from Florida sponsors 7 new prospects in 9 days using methods taught by Mentoring For Free.  That actually doesn't sound to great for me.  Let us try again, the first part worked "Professional network marketer from Florida"  The next part works, but lets make it sound a little better.  "Sponsers 9 new prospects in 7 days."  The end here just killed it for me though.  "methods taught by Mentoring for Free."  That doesn't really describe the benefit does it.  Sponsoring is the Benefit.  Utilizing the methods taught in Mentoring For Free is how we get the benefit.  All right then.   Utilizing the methods taught by Michael Dlouhy and his team of like minded people at Mentoring For Free, a professional network marketer from Florida sponsors 9 new prospects in 7 days.  Check out Mentoring for Free here.  

Well I would like to know what you guys think!  Why don't you send me an e-mail to chismo16@gmail.com and let me know what you think I could do to make that all sound better?  

This is Chysom Scott, bidding you all fair thee well for now.  Stay tuned though, next post will be a lesson on Decision the mastery of Procrastination!